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Dont go through,
It isnt for you.
If only you knew,
thats what not to do.

Sure life sucks,
It isn't supposed to be easy.
But doing somethin' like THAT,
is just selfish and sleazy!

Listen to me,
Get off that stool,
What would she say?
Standing there isn't cool.

Don't do this to her,
Just 'cause she's unsure.
Do her a favor,
Cut the noose loose.





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tori-gurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 28, 2010 at 10:55 am
wow that was awesome. well the meaning wasnt but the way you wrote and rhymed it was amazing. alot of ppl think like this unfortunately but you put it into good words saying not to do it and so on
 
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