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Why

Why did you promise that you wouldn't leave
And then walk out the door
And why did you wait till I was out to leave
And only leaving me with a note that said your sorry but you cant
Can’t what
Can’t handle me
Can’t handle us
Can’t handle WHAT
Why did you not stay longer
Yes I had my problems but so did you
We could have worked it out
Shy did you tell me you love me
Did you mean it or was it another one of your sill little lies
Yes that’s right I knew when you were lying to me
Bu I just ignored it and went on with my life
Why would you hole me so close to you
When all you really wanted to do is push me away
You really had me believing that you were different
That you might be the one that I have been looking for
The one I have been searching for
The one that I was going to turn old and gray with
But I guess that was all just a lie
Another silly lie
I guess all I want to know is why





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writing101 said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 10:34 pm
this is really good. thnx for checking out some of my stuff
 
dylonmichael said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 7:45 pm
i am going to try
 
Hollywog. said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 7:28 pm
This is an amazing poem - keep up your writing! You have incredible talent! =)
Hollywog.
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 8:54 am
thanks alot you should check out my other work
 
revolutioncrier11 said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 11:49 am
I know what you mean I've never but my friends have but this poem can do plenty of different ways that's what I like about it
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 1:18 pm
yea i want to make it into a song but im unsure how just yes
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 4:20 pm
You should i could see it as a song... and do you know any other places like Teenink that are good for teen writers???
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 8:53 am
one of these days i will.......i cant even sing but i have a friend that can.......and no i dont sorry
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 2:07 pm
i would listen to it if you did... and thanks anyway
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 2:47 pm
i talked to my friend and she is going to help me and sing and then we will work on a music video and as soon as its up i will tell you
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 6:21 pm
sweet thanks- ill look forward to it
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 10:07 am
awesome it may be a while it takes for ever to get music nideos done
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 4:28 pm
yeah i know i used to write songs and the piano pieces for them
 
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 7:58 pm
thats awesome i cant play instruments i can kind of rap but im not that good
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 9:32 pm
lol my freind thinks he can rap but... you know. but yea ive been playin piano for seven years now
 
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 2:55 pm
thats awesome i wish i could play an instrument one day i will learn to play the guitar and move to london
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 8:41 pm
that would be the life... haha
 
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:21 am
it will be in college i am going to study abroad and thats where im going just so i can get the feel of the place cant wait
 
revolutioncrier11 replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 9:12 am
that is so cool i wish i cud do that ive always wanted to leave like relly far away but i couldnt leave my mom
 
Olivia W. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 4:12 pm
That was really good and I'm not sure if i can relate but in some twisted way I can. Good job.
 
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