Why

August 24, 2008
By dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"


Why did you promise that you wouldn't leave
And then walk out the door
And why did you wait till I was out to leave
And only leaving me with a note that said your sorry but you cant
Can’t what
Can’t handle me
Can’t handle us
Can’t handle WHAT
Why did you not stay longer
Yes I had my problems but so did you
We could have worked it out
Shy did you tell me you love me
Did you mean it or was it another one of your sill little lies
Yes that’s right I knew when you were lying to me
Bu I just ignored it and went on with my life
Why would you hole me so close to you
When all you really wanted to do is push me away
You really had me believing that you were different
That you might be the one that I have been looking for
The one I have been searching for
The one that I was going to turn old and gray with
But I guess that was all just a lie
Another silly lie
I guess all I want to know is why


The author's comments:
This is just one of my random ideas of poetry. It came to me while I was at a debate clinic in Salina. It kind of goes with some things my friends have told me about their love life but then some are my ideas.

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on Nov. 10 2009 at 10:34 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

this is really good. thnx for checking out some of my stuff

on Oct. 4 2009 at 7:45 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

i am going to try

on Oct. 3 2009 at 9:12 am
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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that is so cool i wish i cud do that ive always wanted to leave like relly far away but i couldnt leave my mom

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:21 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

it will be in college i am going to study abroad and thats where im going just so i can get the feel of the place cant wait

on Oct. 1 2009 at 8:41 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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that would be the life... haha

on Oct. 1 2009 at 2:55 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

thats awesome i wish i could play an instrument one day i will learn to play the guitar and move to london

on Sep. 30 2009 at 9:32 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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lol my freind thinks he can rap but... you know. but yea ive been playin piano for seven years now

on Sep. 30 2009 at 7:58 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

thats awesome i cant play instruments i can kind of rap but im not that good

on Sep. 30 2009 at 4:28 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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yeah i know i used to write songs and the piano pieces for them

on Sep. 30 2009 at 10:07 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

awesome it may be a while it takes for ever to get music nideos done

on Sep. 29 2009 at 6:21 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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sweet thanks- ill look forward to it

on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:47 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

i talked to my friend and she is going to help me and sing and then we will work on a music video and as soon as its up i will tell you

on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:07 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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i would listen to it if you did... and thanks anyway

on Sep. 29 2009 at 8:54 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

thanks alot you should check out my other work

on Sep. 29 2009 at 8:53 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

one of these days i will.......i cant even sing but i have a friend that can.......and no i dont sorry

on Sep. 28 2009 at 7:28 pm
Hollywog. PLATINUM, Mole Creek, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all..

An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Ghandi

This is an amazing poem - keep up your writing! You have incredible talent! =)

Hollywog.

on Sep. 28 2009 at 4:20 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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You should i could see it as a song... and do you know any other places like Teenink that are good for teen writers???

on Sep. 28 2009 at 1:18 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

yea i want to make it into a song but im unsure how just yes

on Sep. 28 2009 at 11:49 am
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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I know what you mean I've never but my friends have but this poem can do plenty of different ways that's what I like about it

on Sep. 28 2009 at 11:03 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

thanks i have never actually been in love but i have heard storys and this is kind of some of what i heard and its crazy how you write poems in some of the weirdest spots


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