Raindrops

December 10, 2012
By Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)


Raindrops
gravity pulling down, blends with my salty tears and i clutch the part of my chest where my heart used to beat

I scream at the wind, calling your name as you seem to fade away, and i drown in the tears because of the fate you succumb to.
Raindrops
fall harder as the clouds grow darker and the wind beats my neck
my voice is carried away and the pain brings me to my knees
I see every moment of your life flash by, every beautiful moment, every laugh and every imperfection, all gone too soon.
Raindrops fall harder and i reach out for you, but these raindrops are holding me down.I can't take the pain and i want to give up, let me be where you are, don't leave me alone.
Then, these raindrops stand still and my sobbing fades as footsteps patter behind me. Before i can turn, i feel your small arms around me, and as you pull me close, you whisper in my ear
Raindrops will fall and the winds will lose control, but everything is OK
your immature words that break my heart as your touch disappears and the raindrops fall again

Raindrops
a new hope found, flying upward into the heavens, gone forever but not for eternity.
And when the rain stops, I stand knowing we will see each other again


The author's comments:
This is dedicated to my little brother who I wont see until my time on earth is completed

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Kipitama GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 5:25 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Sorry it's such a delayed response, haha

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 5:21 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Thank you so so soooo much!!!

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 25 2014 at 8:20 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

What a sad but beautiful poem. I'm sorry about your loss =( You really displayed such intense emotions with this piece, and I look forward to seeing more of your work on this site

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 7:47 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Hey!!! Guess who's back?!?!?! I missed you thhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisssssssssssssssssssssssssssss much!!

on Apr. 26 2013 at 1:06 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Hi friend :) I really do miss you I hope you have not abandoned us on here your such an amazing and good friend. Hope to hear from you again soon. Your BFF ~Sunny~ :)

on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:30 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Remember my real name is Tamara you can put that as my name with my number ;)

on Apr. 3 2013 at 2:56 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

1601 613 2704   Thats my cell you outta txt me sometime!! :D

on Feb. 19 2013 at 3:38 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow I missed you too! :) And thanks for the comment on my poem and thanks for the complement on here! :) Im glad your doing better keep it up!

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2013 at 6:45 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

For the record, i totally missed you! And, yes, my faith was a little shooken up, but im on my way to a speedy recovery. You also have a bright future ahead of you Sunshine. I thank God I have you as my friend

on Feb. 8 2013 at 1:46 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

This is so sad.. I am sorry for your loss and hope you get well eventually. It will be hard but I know you can do it as long as "My sunshine is shinning" ;) Thank you for your comment on my poem that is now published called "I've Decided" It meant alot. Oh hey recently; Christmas I got engaged!!! Have a great or better day!


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