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Just as he who had
Two working ears
Should have been the type
Of man who hears
So the man who had
Two legs to bear him
Should have danced the steps
The music dared him.
Those who have a chance,
But won't from fear;
Might as well have
Niether legs or ears.
I, for one, will
Always have respect
For those who heed the song
And dance the steps.




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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 7:16 pm:
I really love the title, it seemed so pretty and airy to me. The rhymes in here are so soft and flow so well! Most people can't rhyme only throughout their work, but you did and you did it oh so well! I thought it ended very nicely, I like how you used the word 'respect' that word is very sincere, so I felt like you really meant what you were saying! I love this!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 9:01 pm :
Thank you. I am very happy to hear you enjoyed this. Your just all 'round makin me smile today!
 
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laurengerhardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8 at 11:02 pm:
This is absolutely beautiful. 5/5.
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8 at 11:24 pm :
Yay! Sweet!
 
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foreverthefreakgirl said...
Mar. 26 at 5:53 pm:
The Ones WHo Dance is great.... would you mind if i read more of your work? (i dont like just reading peoples  writing, it feels wrong to me)
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 28 at 11:02 am :
Hmm... my reply didnt post. Anyhow, i thanked you, said I was honored youd like to read more, and told you to go ahead. Thanks again!
 
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EPluribusUnumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 6:26 pm:
I like this a lot. It reminds me of who I want to be, someone who never lets fear get in the way of doing what they love.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 12:06 pm :
Thankyou! That is exactly what it is about. I'm glad you like it.
 
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