the deed

November 14, 2012
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows


the deed is done,
you broke my heart,
the day had to come,
we knew it from the start,
my love you pushed aside,
when you left,
that day I cried,
thinking about the day we met,
the action can't be undone,
the time you can't turn back,
when I watched the setting sun,
I thought of your love that I now lack,
I know that it is time,
to forget about you,
hoping that I'll be fine,
and find someone new,
the deed is done,
you broke my heart,
the day had to come,
we knew it from the start.


The author's comments:
this is for My recent Boy friend or should I say my recent ex-boy friend.

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on Oct. 8 2014 at 10:31 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
love comes and goes,
just like the watter flows

okay thanks i will try

on Dec. 7 2012 at 11:56 am
CariePierce BRONZE, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination rules the world." -Napoleon Bonaparte

This reminds me quite a bit of my early style. I get the compaisons and similes, just be extremely wary of cliches.


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