Predator & Prey

October 29, 2012
By MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"stay golden" the outsiders


My feet run down a paved road
My breath is quick
My bag is a burden load
My chaser is pretty slick

My sides are now burning
My head does nothing but pound
My insides are churning
His footsteps behind me are loud

He is gaining on me
I trip over feet
My visions blurring, i can't see
It's the end i am beat

The prey has been killed
The predator is now filled


The author's comments:
i wrote this when i was being troubled by my problems. this poem reminds me of my problems chasing me down the road and in the end they make me fall. i hope you enjoy it!

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on Dec. 2 2012 at 5:36 pm
MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stay golden" the outsiders

thank u so much!

PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2012 at 5:35 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

i liked it, it was blunt. no flower-y language. well done1 keep writing!


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