Shadow Love MAG

October 11, 2012
By chasefire BRONZE, St. Clair Shores, Michigan
chasefire BRONZE, St. Clair Shores, Michigan
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Ghostly light, a long dead star
reflecting from my dimming smile,
the princess in that fading sun
I haven't seen her in a while.

With glowing hearts and beating souls
we loved with love that opened scars.
These scabs we tore, they only bled
with light from young, flirtatious stars.

Then, one night those stars exploded,
gushing love with empty sunlight.
The twilight came with shadows vile,
their open palms, holding midnight …

These shadows came with icy rock,
crashing through my maiden's tower.
I hope she died with all my love,
broken dreams in starlit showers.

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on Dec. 23 2012 at 2:04 pm
DanceOfBlades PLATINUM, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first Law of Equivalent Exchange."

The flow of this poem if just impeccable.

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2012 at 3:26 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Nice :) :) :)

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