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If I Was Juliet

"But soft!" he cries,
beneath my terrace.
Neath' the bright luminous face
of our silver lady, the moon
and the rose's sweet scent
fills the air.
float, i do, to my balcony,
in my gauzy gown,
throw my boot at him,
and yell,
"Shut Up You Moron!
It's Four FREAKIN' AM In The Morning!"



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hippiechick99 said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 9:29 am:
At the beginning I was so into the seriousness, but the end... oh my goodness, that made me laugh out loud. It was a big shock to me, as a reader, just because it was so serious and quoting Shakespear, and then it's like you crack this huge joke... I think you accomplished what you were going for, good job and keep writing :)
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 9:26 am:
HA! i love it! so true and very funny! its also creative! :)
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 9:26 am:
HA! i love it! so true and very funny! its also creative! :)
 
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