Lovely colors

June 28, 2012
By justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.


Love is not black and white,
Love is blue bird that takes flight
Love is in a red heart beating
It is the brown gravel road leading

Love is like a pink rose,
How tall will the green stem grow no one knows
Love can be found in a purple butterfly,
But be broken because of a white lie.

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored
Love can be a black hole
It can be like being hit with coal

Sometimes love is bright
Like the sun's yellow light
Misused love some can't bare it
Its the taste of a rotten orange carrot.

Hey what do you know,
Love can be used with every color of the rainbow.



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on Aug. 4 2013 at 8:07 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"What does not kill you makes you stronger!" or
"Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself" Love doesn't bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

grrrr....similes my mortal enemy try to use a metaphor if you can they can be harder to come up with but show you as a more serious or a classy writer

on Feb. 25 2013 at 11:39 am
Little_Miss_Jo_ BRONZE, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
The greatest weakness of most humans is their hesitancy to tell others how much they love them while they're alive

Really creative how you found a way to relate it to every color!! I like the ending, good job! :)

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:07 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx

 


Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 7:43 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

I love how you came around to say it's the colors of the rainbow. A great poem, all in all.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:26 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Love it! The rhyming adds a lot to it, but its not cheesey! 

necci SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 4:48 pm
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

amazing very well written

secretholder said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 11:48 am
very good poem, i like it alot . my favorite thing about it is the use of colors , to me colors can portray any mood or feeling. i truely love this!

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:35 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx so much i love to see people commenting on it 

 


justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:34 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx!!! its great to hear people like it 

 


justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:32 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thnx

 


on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:27 pm
bethanyvreeve SILVER, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I have a voice too and for better or for worse, mine is a voice that cannot be silenced.

I love this line:

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored

Very creative!


on Jul. 7 2012 at 10:26 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

it sounds like a song on the radio really well done!:)

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 9:11 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Your a really good poet. This was awesome poem. I really liked your message and how you compared love to different stuff. Great Job. Suggestion maybe end with a hook at the end of your poem.

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 4:01 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thank you so much

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 4:00 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

thank you so much

on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:30 pm
Hayley567 BRONZE, Columbus, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
to never see things in the eyes of a writer, will never be fully seen.

as other comments have said it is a creative flow. i hope you create more you are very great at poetry

on Jul. 2 2012 at 12:12 pm
manda_the_random_poet PLATINUM, Elfrida, Arizona
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Very great symbolism and flow here. I enjoy the idea you are portraying and have a special kind of writing. Keep it up. Hope you post more.




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