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Love is not black and white,
Love is blue bird that takes flight
Love is in a red heart beating
It is the brown gravel road leading

Love is like a pink rose,
How tall will the green stem grow no one knows
Love can be found in a purple butterfly,
But be broken because of a white lie.

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored
Love can be a black hole
It can be like being hit with coal

Sometimes love is bright
Like the sun's yellow light
Misused love some can't bare it
Its the taste of a rotten orange carrot.

Hey what do you know,
Love can be used with every color of the rainbow.




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S.S.SplattersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 4, 2013 at 8:07 pm:
grrrr....similes my mortal enemy try to use a metaphor if you can they can be harder to come up with but show you as a more serious or a classy writer
 
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Little_Miss_Jo_ said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 11:39 am:
Really creative how you found a way to relate it to every color!! I like the ending, good job! :)
 
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Johnny99 said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 7:43 pm:
I love how you came around to say it's the colors of the rainbow. A great poem, all in all.
 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 8:07 pm :

thnx

 

 
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megsloveslions said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:26 pm:
Love it! The rhyming adds a lot to it, but its not cheesey! 
 
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necci said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 4:48 pm:
amazing very well written
 
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secretholder said...
Jul. 8, 2012 at 11:48 am:
very good poem, i like it alot . my favorite thing about it is the use of colors , to me colors can portray any mood or feeling. i truely love this!
 
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bethanyvreeve This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 10:27 pm:

I love this line:

Love is like a silver sword
It slays people when it is bored

Very creative!

 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 10:35 pm :

thnx so much i love to see people commenting on it 

 

 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 10:26 pm:
it sounds like a song on the radio really well done!:)
 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 10:34 pm :

thnx!!! its great to hear people like it 

 

 
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DanielM said...
Jul. 5, 2012 at 9:11 am:
Your a really good poet. This was awesome poem. I really liked your message and how you compared love to different stuff. Great Job. Suggestion maybe end with a hook at the end of your poem.
 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 10:32 pm :

thnx

 

 
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Hayley567This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:30 pm:
as other comments have said it is a creative flow. i hope you create more you are very great at poetry
 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 4:01 pm :
thank you so much
 
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manda_the_random_poet said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 12:12 pm:
Very great symbolism and flow here. I enjoy the idea you are portraying and have a special kind of writing. Keep it up. Hope you post more.
 
justme242 replied...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 4:00 pm :
thank you so much
 
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