Worn Out

Very nice and fresh! To me it takes true talent to write powerful short poetry like this. ^_^

this is a nice poem and cleanly written, but I feel that it was too sraight forward and could have used more figures of speech and symbolism for I couldn't understand any deeper than these sentences (if you implied another meaning). But the tanka is clear, and that's good work. Do you mind reading, and frankly commenting on some of my work, too? Thanks!

awesome work i love it!, short and simple you should cheak out some of my poetry rrate/comment<3(:

I like this! Structured poems can often be a little dull, but you did a great job making the most of the format! Nice job! :)

I ThInk this is a good tanka poem. I haven't recently read why that I liked until now. I know exactly how it is to feel just worn out. Great tanka. Question, what's your favorite type of poem to write

I thought maybe it could have been a bit longer, but the poem is really strong and i think the phrase short but sweet would go well here. 

I like how you build it up using repetition and the progression of body then mind then soul then heart. It incorporates all the central parts of a human being. I think a lot of teens can relate to this poem--I certainly can. Often it is hard to find the energy. Overall, great work. :D

I've never heard of a tanka.  Very good job Keep writing

Although I'm not really one to enjoy poems with specific structures like this, I actually really do like this. It's a really good poem, you have talent. :)