Like Me

July 25, 2008
My apprenticeship is
But I have much more to
Though I could snatch my
Within just a
I drastically miss,
Carrying up no more than an
Empty hand.
The sound of
Nothing is
Very Quiet.
But as these
Fall into place,
I fall apart,
And those once near
Are gone.
Like Me.

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dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 1:36 pm
this is really a great poem! :) wow i love it. the last few lines are for sure my favorite, they add a lot of depth to the poem. all around very good :) will you check out some of my work? i would love your comment!
writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 6:53 pm
wow. this is so amazing and heartfelt and so many people can relate to it. like me.
sammy said...
Aug. 13, 2008 at 1:59 pm
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