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Excuse Me.....

Excuse me
I’ve got something to say
And when I’m done
I Promise you
You’ll be happy that you stayed

This is just a little something
I wrote only for you
And we’ve been friends for so long now
It’s time that I tell you this

Before I’ll even tell you this
It’ll be over, said and done
So why don’t we seize the moment; freeze it and own it.
Why don’t we begin?




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hopelessromantic11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8, 2012 at 8:34 pm:
very nice poem it really has some feeling
 
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HarryPotterLover30 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 8:52 pm:
really good, i liked it a lot for a first poem! keep up zee hard work!
 
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Writer_Jordan said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:35 am:
Very light and enjoyable! well done
 
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emmasue1798 said...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 10:23 pm:
ooh danny i really like this! :) i know i already posted a comment but still! :)
 
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msprincess said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 10:52 am:
I reallly love the starting of  this poem! 
 
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starzforeverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 10:51 am:
is just became my favorite poem this is really meaningfull to mee
 
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Kateloveshim13 said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 4:28 pm:
Very Unique, i like it!
 
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NatureWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 31, 2012 at 8:49 pm:
New style of poetry, very nice!
 
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hopelessromantic11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 30, 2012 at 6:14 pm:

this is a really nice poem

 

 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 25, 2012 at 11:47 am:
I don't know why you were hesitant about this piece---I think it's very good:) Made me smile~ 
 
DanielM replied...
May 25, 2012 at 4:54 pm :
Thank you so much. I apperatice your comments.
 
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Nikki_Nightmare said...
May 24, 2012 at 10:59 pm:

this is really good good job for ur first poem.

 

 
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torilutz8 said...
May 24, 2012 at 8:49 am:
I like it, it's really sweet :) good job :)
 
DanielM replied...
May 24, 2012 at 12:24 pm :
thank you so much
 
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emma1798 said...
May 23, 2012 at 10:46 am:
REally good! :)
 
DanielM replied...
May 23, 2012 at 12:21 pm :
thank you so much
 
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TemperanceBrennan said...
May 22, 2012 at 6:51 pm:
Love it!!! I think you should write more poetry you are quite good at it!
 
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AbigailElizabeth said...
May 21, 2012 at 8:05 pm:
I like it because it's hard to understand. And I like inferring. Only good writers can truly do that :) I love it
 
DanielM replied...
May 22, 2012 at 2:01 pm :
thank you so much.
 
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Darbs1325 said...
May 21, 2012 at 6:48 pm:
Awww that is a sweet poem... Well I think i got the picture.... lol, but overal I like it and you should post more stories :D 
 
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