Lonely

April 4, 2012
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.


I’ve got a broken heart and no one to mend it.
I’m the only one who can feel it.
I wish someone would just come and take away this pain.
‘cuz ‘till then, I’ve got nothing to gain.

I just see her standing there,
With the wind blowing in her hair.
I think, “God, why can’t I find her?”

From January to December,
This is how I feel.
This pain I just want to replace, ‘cuz it’s all I feel.
I just want to feel her love,
And this pain to be carried away by a dove.


The author's comments:
i was lonely and heartbroken and felt like no one wanted me when i wrote this

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on Apr. 13 2012 at 4:19 pm
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.

thankies! :D

on Apr. 6 2012 at 11:54 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I tought this was good. It was emotional and pretty, and I really liked the "January to December" part. good job!




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