Miss You

March 19, 2012
By TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.


You’re in a better place
They say
Don’t cry, it’s a disgrace
I loved you, I’ll cry anyway

You left me,
You died
I don’t agree
I cried

Your spot lies open
Your food untouched
My heart is broken
Your toys unbudged

Where did you go
I miss you
6 feet below
I loved you



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Kaili SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 3:43 pm
Kaili SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
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that was a beautiful peom to express something very sad.

on Apr. 12 2012 at 9:48 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

This was amazing!  I loved the way you worked the rhymes in your poem.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 10:21 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

this is good.

MaddiK BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 3:42 pm
MaddiK BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
4 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no great writing, only great re-writing."

I love this poem Tess! You did a really good job with invoking emotion in the reader, I sure felt it! I'm really sorry about your cat too. Great poem.


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