Miss You

March 19, 2012
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You’re in a better place
They say
Don’t cry, it’s a disgrace
I loved you, I’ll cry anyway

You left me,
You died
I don’t agree
I cried

Your spot lies open
Your food untouched
My heart is broken
Your toys unbudged

Where did you go
I miss you
6 feet below
I loved you

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Kaili said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 3:43 pm
that was a beautiful peom to express something very sad.
Allicat001 said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 9:48 pm
This was amazing!  I loved the way you worked the rhymes in your poem.
KrystalT said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 10:21 am
this is good.
MaddiK said...
Mar. 24, 2012 at 3:42 pm
I love this poem Tess! You did a really good job with invoking emotion in the reader, I sure felt it! I'm really sorry about your cat too. Great poem.
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