Bitter Flavor

February 10, 2012
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Spiders skittering inside vulnerable souls,
weaving their cobwebs in and out of lost hearts;
their host oblivious to the gaping holes

stretching the gap into eternity that parts
Creator from created so hopelessly,
that no more can one decipher where it starts.

Revealed, we now see their true identity,
never trusting our everlasting Savior,
leaning on their twisted silk of catastrophe.

Unaware that their rebellious behavior
condemns them to live in ceaseless, tortuous death.
And spiders turn to drink their bitter flavor.





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raeee said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 7:23 pm
this is absolutely fantastic (:
 
J-punzle27 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 7:19 pm
I agree with Tim, I enjoyed the discribtion. It was different from anything I've read before, and I liked it.
 
J-punzle27 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 7:19 pm
I agree with Tim, I enjoyed the discribtion. It was different from anything I've read before, and I liked it.
 
Timpani_Queen said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 7:14 pm
I personally loved it. Great description, great picture. You are really good. :D
 
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