Without You Just Won't Do

January 31, 2012
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My love, unstoppable
Ever-lasting and true
My heart, it belongs
To only you.

Your heart, insightful
You see me through.
But you don’t use it to love me;
You use it for you.

You play me like a violin
A fiddler; the world’s best.
Just as I think your about to let go
You finish your rest.

I beg you; Continue to play me
Though it hurts, without you just won’t do.
My life, my death, my blessing, my curse;
All of them are you.

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lovemenot said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 11:47 pm
I have posted many comments on your work, sorry if I am annoying you. But your poetry is so spectacular...
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Mar. 7, 2012 at 7:25 pm

Lolz please don't apologize! It made my day to see so many comments thank you so much and if you like my writing plz check up often i'm trying to post more and more work :)

thanks so much for your support it means the world to me

i see that you urself are a VIP on the website. I'll check your work out too :)


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