All hope is lost

January 13, 2012
By EvelinDoe BRONZE, Sellersburg, Indiana
EvelinDoe BRONZE, Sellersburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Infinity and Beyonddd ~Toy Story
YOLOs the motto~Drake


Sudden swift falling, stop
You hit rock bottom, seconds
No ones there, alone
No one to say they care, been left
Everything you've worked for is lost
Just like you
Breathing isn't easy anymore
Constant pressure
Once so care free...
Now tied down and dying
Screaming, clawing to get out
You'd give up anything,
not to be alone
Life dissolving, almost gone
Everyone knew it was coming
YOU failed to listen
Constant memories of regret
Eating at you....
Corrupted thoughts replaying
Over and over again....
So much anger and hurt
Fueled you
All you wanted was for freedom
DO I LOOK FREE TO YOU?
Giving up. All hope is lost!


The author's comments:
My best friend was depressed for a while... But what she wrote inspired me.

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