Beyond My Doors

January 5, 2012
By n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur


It's a messed up world beyond my doors
I'd rather just stay cooped up in my room
Blasting my music
And sitting all alone...
I love being inspired by the sillohuetes on my wall
And better yet from the silence of it all
No one knows the trouble I've been through
And no one cares about the crap that I do.
Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall
Wondering if anyone sees me as human at all!
The tears are at the brim of my eyes
Yet not one of those haters will see me cry!
My hope lies in the end
And the thought of death is my friend!
The sooner I leave this world
The faster the false light will turns out!



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on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:30 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Umm....well yeah i believe it..kind of why i wrote it but im trying hard to find other options first. But thanks! I love writing poetry vecause it really helps...its a good 'option'

on Feb. 3 2012 at 7:43 pm
Eliquencity PLATINUM, Winfield, Illinois
20 articles 0 photos 28 comments
Great writing. It made me sad. I don't know if you agree with what you wrote, but death is not the answer! Remember you are awesome, and living is awesome! But, seriously, your a good writer! I'm pretty bad at poetry, but you rocked it! :)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:07 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

thats good!! Its awesome when people can relate to my writings:)

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 7:43 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Absolutely love this! So relatable!

on Feb. 1 2012 at 3:11 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Wow thanks your comment is encouraging:)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 3:11 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Thank you! i appreciate you checking it out:)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:59 pm
Jakethesnake SILVER, Hernando, Mississippi
6 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Read, Read... Read everything, then write."-William Faulkner

Nice :) this is really good.

Aaka131 SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:57 pm
Aaka131 SILVER, Dunbar, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Seuss

Great poem I'm pretty sure almost everyone can relate to this at one point or another. I also love the way you worded it, it really does capture the reader's attention and help to visualize it.

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:55 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Awesome! Thanks:)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:54 pm
Allenstine BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments
I really enjoyed it, and I could completely connect with it. Keep up the good work ;)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:34 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

aww thanks:)

iheartz BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:27 pm
iheartz BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
searching for answers in a world that answers none of them at all, or My heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with- kelly clarkson

hey :) this is really good:)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:12 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

thank you! i like when my readers can relate it helps me to realize im not alone even when its seems i am! Thanks!

on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:05 pm
cassidybrooke93 BRONZE, Mundelein, Illinois
1 article 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
i may be lying in the gutter, but i'm staring at the stars.

i really enjoyed this poem - it's very powerful and i can easily relate :)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:31 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Aww thanks:)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:28 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

thank you! very encouraging and honestly pointed something out to me i didn't even realize in my own writing;)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:22 pm
tes1634 PLATINUM, Olive Hill, Kentucky
46 articles 16 photos 17 comments
Woah, I love this :))) My fave part was, "Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall." I mean, first of all, it's cleverly worded, plus it points out those little things everyone does but remains oblivious to... AND the whole dang thing has such good imagery... :) glad i read it! :)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:20 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 29 comments
hey :) i love this poem . the way your words flow is very powerful!!


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