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Beyond My Doors

It's a messed up world beyond my doors
I'd rather just stay cooped up in my room
Blasting my music
And sitting all alone...
I love being inspired by the sillohuetes on my wall
And better yet from the silence of it all
No one knows the trouble I've been through
And no one cares about the crap that I do.
Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall
Wondering if anyone sees me as human at all!
The tears are at the brim of my eyes
Yet not one of those haters will see me cry!
My hope lies in the end
And the thought of death is my friend!
The sooner I leave this world
The faster the false light will turns out!





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Write4fun said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 7:43 pm
Great writing. It made me sad. I don't know if you agree with what you wrote, but death is not the answer! Remember you are awesome, and living is awesome! But, seriously, your a good writer! I'm pretty bad at poetry, but you rocked it! :)
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 8:30 pm
Umm....well yeah i believe it..kind of why i wrote it but im trying hard to find other options first. But thanks! I love writing poetry vecause it really helps...its a good 'option'
 
Shmelmo said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 7:43 pm
Absolutely love this! So relatable!
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 8:07 pm
thats good!! Its awesome when people can relate to my writings:)
 
Jakethesnake said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:59 pm
Nice :) this is really good.
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Thank you! i appreciate you checking it out:)
 
Aaka131 said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:57 pm
Great poem I'm pretty sure almost everyone can relate to this at one point or another. I also love the way you worded it, it really does capture the reader's attention and help to visualize it.
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Wow thanks your comment is encouraging:)
 
Allenstine said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:54 pm
I really enjoyed it, and I could completely connect with it. Keep up the good work ;)
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:55 pm
Awesome! Thanks:)
 
cassidybrooke93 said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 8:05 pm
i really enjoyed this poem - it's very powerful and i can easily relate :)
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:12 pm
thank you! i like when my readers can relate it helps me to realize im not alone even when its seems i am! Thanks!
 
kk-gothgirl-kk replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:27 pm
hey :) this is really good:)
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 2:34 pm
aww thanks:)
 
connsgirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 7:22 pm
Woah, I love this :))) My fave part was, "Listening to the trading of words beyond the wall." I mean, first of all, it's cleverly worded, plus it points out those little things everyone does but remains oblivious to... AND the whole dang thing has such good imagery... :) glad i read it! :)
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 7:28 pm
thank you! very encouraging and honestly pointed something out to me i didn't even realize in my own writing;)
 
stardreamer said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 7:20 pm
hey :) i love this poem . the way your words flow is very powerful!!
 
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 7:31 pm
Aww thanks:)
 
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