Birthday princess

January 5, 2012
By n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur


It was a stupid joke!!
I didnt know how far it would go!
One hit led to another,
And for a second I didnt view him as my brother...
My anger blurred my vision
And before I knew it I was swinging,
Dad stepped in thinking he'd save the day
But he started yelling and didnt even care the about the way-
The way it all started...
Next thing you know mom runs out the room all panciked,
And then they start going at it
Then I turn around to see the birthday princess-
Shes crying and whispering a prayer
Shes hopin that someone will show they care,
First minute of being thirteen
And she already had invisioned a better thing,
She never imagined a fight
Especially not at twelve o' two at night!
Frankly neither did I
And now I'm saying I'm sorry I made the birthday princess cry...


The author's comments:
This was a poem I wrote to say sorry to my little sister, I got into a fight with my older brother literally as the clock hit midnight-beginning her birthday...and sad thing is it was over a little joke. Any how I love her and wish her a happy 13th birthday!

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on Feb. 3 2012 at 5:38 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Sorry...thats tough didnt mean to bring that up...but thanks for checkin out my poem though!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:14 pm
Kaitbryn PLATINUM, Cushing, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
In economics, hope and faith coexist with great scientific pretension and also a deep desire for respectability. -- John Kenneth Galbraith

Very soon we must all face the decision between what is easy and what is right. -- Albus Dumbledore

Sounds alot like my family

on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:13 pm
Kaitbryn PLATINUM, Cushing, Oklahoma
23 articles 25 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
In economics, hope and faith coexist with great scientific pretension and also a deep desire for respectability. -- John Kenneth Galbraith

Very soon we must all face the decision between what is easy and what is right. -- Albus Dumbledore

Sound alot like my family before the divorce......

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:39 am
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

lol Thanks:}

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:39 am
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Thank you:)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:19 am
nintendude794 BRONZE, Keller, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"We cannot change the cards we are dealt, just how we play the hand." "Time is all you have. And one day you might find that you have less than you think." - Randy Pousch

Notta bad! :)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:07 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

Good Job!!!!!!!! Loved it!


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