Rain reflects life.

December 14, 2011
By Haylynn GOLD, Skiatook, Oklahoma
Haylynn GOLD, Skiatook, Oklahoma
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The thick sight of clear reflecting tears,
The sweet smell of ever clear falls.
That moment that shatters into fears,
That sound of someone hitting the walls.

Slowly falling in and out of love,
Or falling fast onto the ground.
It is as pure & innocent as a dove,
It's the small beats in your heart that pound.

Running away from it's small wet feet,
I hear them cry as they clash.
Only afraid of being beat,
Life throws down fast within a flash.



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Haylynn GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2015 at 5:58 pm
Haylynn GOLD, Skiatook, Oklahoma
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Thank you so much!

kanade SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2014 at 12:54 pm
kanade SILVER, Missoula, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
In a society that worships love, freedom and beauty, dance is sacred. It is a prayer for the future, a remembrance of the past, and a joyful exclamation of thanks for the present.
-Atwater-Rhoides, Ameila

I love your writing. This poem is beautiful. I have read some of your other poems and they are all great.

Haylynn GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:18 pm
Haylynn GOLD, Skiatook, Oklahoma
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Thank you (:

Inksy SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 1:32 am
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

This is beautiful (: The last stanza is amazing... you write beautifully. Keep it up (:


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