A Sandy, Tan on the Land

December 18, 2011
By babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
11 articles 5 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind."
~Mahatma Gandhi


Blue waves crash on the sand
People chatter on the land
While we tan

As we tan
We run on the land
Through the sand

The memories on the land
Die when I tan
On the sand

Nobody can take the memories of the tan and sand away from the land



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babysteps GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 2:27 pm
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
11 articles 5 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind."
~Mahatma Gandhi

thank you!!!!!:)

on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:28 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
6 articles 9 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

Awesome! Skillfully written, and love the rhyming pattern. You say so much with such few words :)


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