A Sandy, Tan on the Land

December 18, 2011
Blue waves crash on the sand
People chatter on the land
While we tan

As we tan
We run on the land
Through the sand

The memories on the land
Die when I tan
On the sand

Nobody can take the memories of the tan and sand away from the land





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otherpoet said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 4:28 pm
Awesome! Skillfully written, and love the rhyming pattern. You say so much with such few words :)
 
babysteps replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 2:27 pm
thank you!!!!!:)
 
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