Teen Ink

EleanorRigbysGospelofPeace said...
Nov. 8 at 4:48 pm:

Wow. This is simply beautiful. It is incredibly descriptive and unique. Your writing definitely has its own voice, and I love it. Continue with the great work. You're destined for something great!

 

Avalynn said...
Oct. 30 at 10:21 pm:

Wow, this is so amazing! It's unique and reflective- i love it!

 

Britt<3 said...
Oct. 30 at 6:11 pm:

This is such a great poem. Everyone can totally relate. Keep it up your awesome!

 

Omg i luv ur piece!
i can really relate to it and it is very discribing and interesting it makes me want to keep reading

 

Kitten111 said...
Oct. 30 at 12:34 am:

this hit me ... i have lot of things i should tell my mum but i dont ..... mostly because its the way she treats me ... youve given me a idea though thanxs and keep up the awesome work

 

kaeny said...
Oct. 29 at 9:41 pm:

This is beautiful, thank you.

 

Nicky_1 said...
Oct. 8 at 9:32 am:

I really like this poem.It speaks true life in everyy verse.Keep them coming!!

 

stephaniekip said...
Sep. 16 at 8:55 pm:

awesome poem ! Keep up the great work!

 

Sara B. said...
Aug. 24 at 1:58 pm:

Hahah, amazing, i loved it. Kepp writinggg :D

 

amrwrites said...
Aug. 17 at 8:00 pm:

I would repeat what everyone said, but you probably already know how talented you are. But anyways, you're very talented. Haha. :)

 

Shante G. said...
Aug. 2 at 10:17 pm:

really good :)

 

Jessica P. said...
Jul. 1 at 7:49 pm:

I love it. =)

 

despurlock said...
Jun. 22 at 6:50 pm:

Wow, this is beautiful. You never come outright and say what the secret is and you leave the reader begging in thougt's trance. I love it! Please check out some of my poems and let me know what you think! Thanks! And again, your poem is phenomenal!

 

Nicely written, I enjoyed reading it :)

 

tigeress3 said...
Jun. 3 at 10:02 pm:

I can totally relate to this! Beautiful!

 

Live+Laugh+love said...
Jun. 1 at 1:24 pm:

many people can relate, you give your readers what they want...nice :D
like to hear more

 

musiclover71 said...
May 31 at 3:51 am:

i love it. this is.. so amazing i mean genius

 

i understand u i had the same problem its hard to tell my mother things because i feel as though the things that i may do is my secrets cause i feel as though no one is living my life but me

 

BeccaBlue826 said...
May 9 at 4:34 pm:

um...wow...im still kind of stunned...that was great...i felt the bam on the last line and on the first four...it was great...

 

Sara B. said...
May 7 at 5:39 am:

i absolutley love the heart metaphores! i get where you are coming from, there are soo many things i could never tell my mom

 

cocoa.cars said...
May 4 at 7:53 pm:

my gosh i know exactly how you feel, i love the symbolism of puzzle pieces in it, i use that a lot too.

 

Akaeda said...
May 4 at 5:08 pm:

I totally understand where you're coming from with this. Come check out my work sometime!

 

I love this poem its kinda like me i got a lot of secrets i cant tell my mother and i need to keep to my self it goes perfect with a lot of people i love it good job on writing this

 

Terry S. said...
Apr. 30 at 3:29 pm:

yea its a pretty good poem has alot of understanding behind it nice work

 

teen poetry is so ridiculous.

 

chelchelbear said...
Apr. 29 at 4:45 pm:

This is a really nice poem... very true...and... real, you know! i like it... do it! j/k j/k .... but seriously nice poem... lotes

 

Monica T. said...
Apr. 29 at 1:59 am:

it was a good poem!! i hope to read more of your work!! :)

 

Beautiful! :)

 

Evynn A. said...
Apr. 28 at 6:54 pm:

That is an excellent poem. I feel the same way about my mother.

 

This makes me feel the pain i keep inside, and remember all of my dark secrets that hide deep in my soul.

 

I love this poem...But you don't have to even think about want I say but maybe you should not go from talking about secrets than a puzzle than secrets again But I do like the way you were able to tie it all in

 

sunnybaby said...
May 6 at 7:51 pm:

this is really good when i read it i saw me cuz i dont tell my mom alot of secrets and its good cuz u dont always have to be open bout every thing so good job and good luck on writing u shuld check out mine.

 

Martha H. said...
Apr. 24 at 12:57 am:

this is such a great poem and it describes exactly how i feel

 

music said...
Apr. 23 at 7:50 pm:

this is awesome so true i love it kinda sounds like me

 

blackamethyst said...
Apr. 22 at 9:09 pm:

very cool. i dont think a lot of teenagers share everything with their parents and you've summarized it nicely

 

GurlGutta said...
Apr. 22 at 6:42 pm:

I really like this poem because I can really feel the emotions and thoughts you put into this peice

 

Priscilla C. said...
Apr. 18 at 7:07 pm:

Beautiful. I like the part about the "still-beating heart".

 

sissykat said...
Apr. 18 at 6:52 pm:

I know exactly how you feel about in the poem. I think it was really well written. You should continue to write.

 

Chelsea C. said...
Apr. 18 at 2:46 pm:

i can completly relate! there are so many things that i just can't seem to tell my parents either...good job! =)

 

Mikal said...
Apr. 18 at 6:48 am:

Check out my poems

 

AndThisIsReal said...
Apr. 14 at 8:50 pm:

This was just great.

 

tbbf09 said...
Apr. 14 at 12:56 pm:

this is such an awesome poem i wrote one kinda like it and i will post it on here and try to get it published by teenink soon ,but mine is called she never knew and it's much more deeper than this one and has some adult content too. i write all the time and have 2 poems published on this sight but i accidently put them down as anonomouse writer they are called my prison poem and always and forever..i hope you check them out...

 

mary G. said...
Apr. 11 at 1:13 am:

This is so amazing!
You are such the writer!
I love how all the other comments say they can relate.
well, it is very relative-is that a word?
:)

 

LilJ<3 said...
Apr. 10 at 11:11 pm:

Margaret, you got quiet a response on the poem! I can see why... its great. Its so true that there are some things we want to keep to ourselves that we dont want other to people to know about...Not having anyone know is what makes it special or unique cause only you know it...I think you did a great job and congrats on getting it published in the mag!
♥ Jackie

 

joshua S. said...
Apr. 9 at 1:00 am:

thats kinda koool.... too dramatic like

 

Nice poem. I think we can all relate to it. Everyone has sectrets that they don't want to tell anyone...especially their parents. I do.

 

This is Amazing i can totally relate!!!! :)

 

mrbananaman9 said...
Apr. 7 at 1:40 am:

I can totally relate

 

CutiePie said...
Apr. 5 at 6:33 pm:

this is so good. i can really relate because i have big secrets of my own

 

angeleyes1995 said...
Apr. 5 at 5:22 am:

I can relate ur peom is beautiful please look at mines and comment tell me how u feel. Thanks
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