the current

November 30, 2011
By nerdlover17 PLATINUM, Kendallivlle, Indiana
nerdlover17 PLATINUM, Kendallivlle, Indiana
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Take me away
I beg
To the current
Of the sea
But it drags me in
Deeper to the core
Where burning hatred
Burning lies
Burning hurt
Weighs me down
No I plead
Let me go
But its grasp tightens
And drags me deeper
To my deepest secrets
That shames me
To the sadness that haunts my mind
To the dark divide
At the end of the tunnel
Telling me to do it
The sea throws me around
And I start to drown
But the funny thing is
Drowning isn’t bad
When the truth sears through you
And hurt attacks

The author's comments:
this is how I feel half the time. I'm sure others feel it too.

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on Jan. 21 2012 at 7:15 pm
nerdlover17 PLATINUM, Kendallivlle, Indiana
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I will cheak it out. I hve it rough, but i write good poems fro it.

on Jan. 4 2012 at 9:10 am
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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this is fantastic!!! i Love It!!! and your right others do feel it too, like me half the time, haha i know i prob sound like i have a sad little life but nah, i know my poems are sad too but thats only cause a stupid, beautiful boy broke my heart, check out my poem beautiful boy and you'll know what i mean


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