Help me.

November 27, 2011
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Crushed dreams.
Vacant soul.
Ripped heart.
Gaping hole.
Messed up.
Twisted thought.
Haunted mind.
Memories blot.
Tears dry.
All alone.
Worst fear.
Inward groan.
So lost.
Left behind.
Hurt deep.
Eyes blind.
Help me.





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Sapphire1225 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 7:12 pm
can't believe how you could express so much emotion in just a couple of words synced together! awesome poem!!! check out my work too!! thanxx
 
drishm said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 12:03 pm
wow! thats like reallllly awesome!!! i love it... especially the fact that you used just two words in each line and the impact of just those two words is so strong!!! realllly good :)
 
KWeiberg321 said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:45 pm
Twisted thought. & Haunted mind. <--- Loved those lines. This is really deep and down to earth. Good job.
 
Selustin_Gieber said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:45 pm

this is reakky good

i think it has a good idea to it

 

 
Triumphant said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 2:17 pm

Twisted thought is a great line i enjoyed it (: keep writing ! 

 

 
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