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the place where I go desperately and anxiously
The place where I walk oddly and shoeless
Because my toes feel uncomfortable
when they feel the cold floor

The place where I violently and abruptly release my insanity, my craziness,my twisted unknown artistry

Where my hair raises up
because of the goosebumps
Because of my frosty,twisted and dark imagination

It's the place where I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me

This place is mine
This place is my precious
It's my well preserved iron trunk



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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 12:29 pm:
So powerful! I LOVE this! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot:) Thanks!
 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 17, 2012 at 3:15 pm :
i'm glad u lik it. I ll check urs too !!
 
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Skyeblu said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:23 pm:
I like it its light and heavy all at the same time if that makes sense lol I'm looking forward to more of your poems:)
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:52 pm :
tnx,glad u like it
 
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daph199 said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 8:59 pm:
It reminds me of a little kid sneaking away to a clubhouse. I get a sort of "cute" feel from it, although that may seem like a weird response lol. it's nice and light :)
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 9:32 pm :
tnx, daph, really appreciate it
 
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Nick-M said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 6:42 pm:
It was really nice-- felt kind of vulnerability in the (or your) character with it. Very cool!
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 9:43 pm :
tnx for the comment, nick
 
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brokedownandlonely said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 6:55 pm:
i hope to c more as well
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 9:42 pm :
tnx, broke,sure u will c more
 
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romancer2 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 9:57 pm:
Awesome!! Loved it!
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 10:17 pm :
tnx romancer
 
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I.Just.Wanna.Be.Me.Lovee said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 8:57 pm:
Nice! I Love It!
 
artmantist replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 10:18 pm :
tnx, ijustwannabemelovee
 
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NightGoddess17 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 8:18 am:
Great job artmantist!! Favorite line: the whole thing!! great job!!!
 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 8:54 am :
tnx, goddess17
 
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Zahria said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 11:31 am:
this is good ... keep of the good work
 
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MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 10:11 pm:
I love the line that says "It's the place I wake up at 2 am to write what the sleepy morning whispers me". it makes me love the cottage!
 
artmantist replied...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 10:14 pm :
tnk u very much,glad u like it
 
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WhiteWings said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 1:21 pm:

One word. Great

 

 
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