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Death Before Life Together

Did he really mean what he said?
He said I love you, but he went away
It was the last note that I read

My heart stopped as if I was dead
Looks like I’ll lose my love today
Did he really mean what he said?

He sent me a rose that was as red as red
With the letter that he sent me in the end of May
It was the last note that I read

There I was lying in my bed
Thinking about his words this day
Did he really mean what he said?

I sat by the window looking at my shed
One more day with him I prayed
It was the last note that I read

He asked me to marry him but now he is dead
It was a terrible ending to a messed up play
Did he really mean what he said?
It was the last note that I read




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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 12:18 pm:
Nice poem ,I like the expressions !
 
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jasmin101 said...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 9:40 am:
i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really do, i love the subject , i love the way it rhymes !!! love love
 
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Jessicaa said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 10:13 am:

Hello, i have no idea who you are but your poem is very good. i think if you sumbit this to geeee idk a school contest i think you would really win. put more up asap.

 

 

 
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