Death Before Life Together

December 1, 2011
By scarper94 SILVER, Beloit, Wisconsin
scarper94 SILVER, Beloit, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Don't stop moving forward.


Did he really mean what he said?
He said I love you, but he went away
It was the last note that I read

My heart stopped as if I was dead
Looks like I’ll lose my love today
Did he really mean what he said?

He sent me a rose that was as red as red
With the letter that he sent me in the end of May
It was the last note that I read

There I was lying in my bed
Thinking about his words this day
Did he really mean what he said?

I sat by the window looking at my shed
One more day with him I prayed
It was the last note that I read

He asked me to marry him but now he is dead
It was a terrible ending to a messed up play
Did he really mean what he said?
It was the last note that I read



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.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 12:18 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Nice poem ,I like the expressions !

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 9:40 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really do, i love the subject , i love the way it rhymes !!! love love

on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:13 am
Jessicaa BRONZE, Beloit, Wisconsin
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"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go. Things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they're right. You believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
- Marilyn Monroe

Hello, i have no idea who you are but your poem is very good. i think if you sumbit this to geeee idk a school contest i think you would really win. put more up asap.

 

 



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