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The Fury

November 2, 2011
By LCRinehart BRONZE, Great Falls, Montana
LCRinehart BRONZE, Great Falls, Montana
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With fury building up
He aims for his target
Slowly he tries again
He has no luck
He aims for his target
Looking for the right victim
He has no luck
Lounging and thrashing about
Looking for the right victim
Searching and searching
Lounging and thrashing about
It’s getting harder and harder
Searching and searching
He hears no sound but a light whisper
It’s getting harder and harder
He can’t hear that light whisper no more
He hears no sound but a light whisper
Creeping around he strains his ears for hopes of hearing something
He can hear that light whisper no more
That whisperer was saved
Slowly he tries again
With fury building up

The author's comments:
i was thinking about hunting when i wrote this but it sounds like i was thinking about hunting people ??!! so in the end i don't really know what to think about this poem.......i just like it though......

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