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The Truth About Forever Goodbyes

A sad embrace filled with warm sorrow,
Happiness today leads to a grim tomorrow.
Falling, rising, diving while soaring,
Sailing for hours while tied to the mooring,
Unexplainable bliss, then hit by a near miss
It’s hard to believe that anyone can handle this
Now two lives are stuck, glued apart
Tied separate by what’s in the heart
All the riches of the world are nothing
Having all of them wouldn’t mean anything
The same, now, life will never seem,
As a pillow is met by a hot, salty rain.



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FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 10:39 am
250 views, and still 5 stars.  Thanks for all of the rating and commenting!
 
Tiggerlily14 replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 2:39 pm
woah, I almost missed commenting on this one  :P  well I commented, good bye
 
laxgirl9 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 2:34 pm
Beautiful love the metaphoric ending
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 3:58 pm
Thanks. :)
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 5:23 pm
This is my favorite poem of yours! So deep! I LOVE it! I can so relate to it too! :)
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 5:26 pm
Thanks, it's probably my most personaly poem.
 
EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 1:14 pm
I love it.
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 1:16 pm
Thanks.  :)  I just made a slide presentaion using this poem.  I can email it to anyone who wants it.
 
Tiggerlily14 replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 4:52 pm
send it to me  =D
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 4:22 pm
YES!!!  Finally 100 views, and still 5 stars.  Thanks, guys!
 
Christmas! <3 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:48 pm
a little excited?......  :P
 
samwich7 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 4:13 pm
love, love, LOVE
 
AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:35 pm
... that was epic, what an ending
 
jcrisp replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:45 pm
agreed!   :)
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 4:09 pm
Thanks. :)  This poem means the most to me, out of all my work.
 
Tiggerlily14 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 9:00 am
I know what it is like to have your best friend living hundreds of miles away, but mine is thousands   :(
 
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