broken hearts

November 3, 2011
broken bonds
severed ties
hearts left open
torn and broken
left to cry
i wonder why
ere i was left
i tried my best
im falling apart
from this broken heart





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scarsonmywrist said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 8:21 pm
thats what i do sad stuff is always my best work
 
kwoodman821 said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 8:09 pm

the ending is great, It sounds so sad, its almost like you can feel your pain through your words

 

 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 8:14 pm
i love how you ended it.
 
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