I See You

October 26, 2011
By AspenRuddick BRONZE, Muncie, Indiana
AspenRuddick BRONZE, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"When you look in a mirror, you should only see yourself"

I see you.
Standing alone.
No one around.
The enemy in you has fallen.
This day would come.
When you bleed your last.
The darkened cloud casts over you.
That cloud was on me.
Rain is following the cloud.
Ready to drown your pleas for mercy out.
Though no lone soul may here you.
Your alone.
See why you should have never rid of me?
Your spirit needs me.
Feel the rush of cold hard souls bound to you.
Feel the weight of torn out hearts.
Your lies will no longer linger.
And now, I see you.

The author's comments:
Nice little quick poem I wrote! please critique!

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