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Their eyes tell silent stories.
Stories that would shock even the darkest of hearts.
These eyes have seen worse than some could even dream of.
They’ve seen killing and death, and pain and suffering to extents that can be hard to imagine.
Eyes that should be learning how to read are instead being taught how to fight.
Emotionless eyes are being forced to kill in gruesome ways.
Eyes that seem to have run out of tears, because crying never helped.
Their sobs are unheard, their tears are unseen.
Children who are innocent are being ruined by men who see no hope in their government.
Men who are willing to take advantage of an irreplaceable innocence.
The eyes are deep brown.
A brown so deep you could get lost in it.
Eyes that catch attention for their beauty.
They silently tell of innocence lost and of silent tears cried.
These are the eyes of a child soldier.

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EmilyOlive This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 3:35 pm:
It's perfect. It's beautiful and perfect and I feel that if I say too much I just won't do it any justice at all. This is marvelous. Oops. Still not QUITE the right word!
 
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Stephaniere This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 1:01 am:
This is beautiful, I can only dream of writing something this powerful.
 
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sohardtoget said...
May 29, 2009 at 3:20 pm:
great poem
i disagree with everlastings words
very moving poem!

very well written
 
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cross-i'd-leopard said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 3:32 am:
That was truly beautiful. The world needs fmore people with your train of thought. That was so true, it made me want to cry. I applaud you.
 
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locked up in bca said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 7:32 pm:
i am locked up in bca your poem is pretty kool
 
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Willow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 10:13 pm:
very powerful. so true.
 
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melerzzz11 said...
Mar. 23, 2009 at 2:27 am:
That is amazing. you are such a powerful writer! "The eyes are deep brown. A brown so deep you could get lost in it." That is such great imagery. I can see the children's eyes. Your an amazing writer. You have a great career ahead of you if you continue this great work.
 
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Brittany A. said...
Mar. 1, 2009 at 7:15 am:
this was amazing it sent the message loud and clear i really liked it your a very good writer
 
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xjustlistenx said...
Feb. 19, 2009 at 10:40 pm:
that was freaking amazing!!!!
 
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horns_101 said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 6:12 pm:
WOW.dat was pwrful!!!
 
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vampgirl1234 said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 6:11 pm:
wow. very depressing. but great! nice work. m/(*-*)\m
 
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Mr. Happy said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 4:24 pm:
Can you add stories to your favorites or something. because I would add this to mine. it's extremely powerful. It's amazing.
 
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Mr. Happy said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 4:21 pm:
This is one of the most amazing peices i've read. It is so true, and such a sad story, but it's true. very nice job.
 
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EverlastingWords said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 3:47 pm:
Boring, bland, and depressing.
 
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sunnysmile17 said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 5:57 am:
i really liked this poem. it was kinda depressing though. and i think it kinda read more like a writing piece instead of a poem. very deep perspective though. :)
 
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bmxmonster33 said...
Dec. 28, 2008 at 4:43 am:
i really enjoyed this poem, its so true.
keep up the good work
 
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Critic said...
Dec. 27, 2008 at 11:58 pm:
I can tell that you feel strongly about the subject, and I completely agree with what you are trying to say. However, I thought that the poem was not particularly well-written and could use a lot of improvements.
 
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tweedle dee said...
Dec. 30, 2008 at 1:37 am:
this is so heartbreaking
 
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CJ K. said...
Dec. 1, 2008 at 9:07 pm:
Very powerful and insightful incredible description of feelings.I would like to read another like it
 
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xXxrainbowsxXx said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 2:52 am:
This isso true and its just wonderus! I fell in love and cried literally with this poem. You truely have talent and i dont know you but i am proud to have read it. *applause*
 
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