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Love Lives On

October 7, 2011
By Aegis PLATINUM, Monroe, Michigan
Aegis PLATINUM, Monroe, Michigan
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I stand here with a smile

Knowing that everything I did was worth the while

I promised you all those months ago that I love you

And still to this very day I still do



Many times I've misstepped

Through my mistakes you wept

Many times I've nearly given in except

The thoughts of you and I was what I kept



You make me feel so alive

I never thought someone else could make me thrive

Through the pain I cleave

Hoping that you'd never leave



Hoping that you'd say yes

Hoping that having me as a husband you will not detest

The author's comments:
This actually surprised by how much I liked it. Normally, I dislike the stuff that comes up in my head from Creative Writing, but this was worth it. plus it has a very different vibe from the other "poeish" takes on romance.

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