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Disinfected

Disinfect

The all-infected

Supersticious

Race erected

From the ashes

Of neglected

Moral - truth

Never detected

Disinfect

What death

Undid



Redefine

What life,

one time,

In a moment

Became mine

In a moment

Became thine

What life?

Terror, death

And crime?

Redefine

What made

Him mine



Confiscate

The vices laid

Never-ending

Coarse unsated

Souls, full filled

With slime and hatred

Overruning

Never slaked, did

The river flow

And make

Our cups run over?

Confiscat-

ing vices paid

Over again

Forever?



Disinfect

The unexpected

And expect

To be detected

Beaten, stoned

Torn, neglected

For the sake of

Slaking hate

'Fore it's too late

And time runs fine

With blood and whine

The souls of crime

Death, black slime

Running down

The black, infected

Wall of life

Now death, erected

From the shame

Of Adam's name

Lay the blame

Nigh on you

On Him



Neglected

Undetected

Unerected

Uninfected

Redefined

Undenied

Crucified

Confiscated

Resurected

Elevated

Now awaited



So we strive

To disinfect

Those still alive

Until the next

Ageless eon

Sees us taken

In the skies

Away to heaven

To the world

From which the Lord

Ascended

Ammended

And defended

For us

Forever

Never-end, did

The river flow?

Fast or slow?



No one will know

If we won't show

And we don't go

And live

To die

For a world

That death

Undid



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 9:29 pm:
dayang. I love the last stanza. I am loving the use of vocabularment. Fait ta danse captain, fait ta danse.
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 7:44 pm :
Haha, thanks much, Boosflashman, long time since I talked with you :-)
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 8:08 pm :
U kno it just so happened that I was missing u very much, crying my eyes out and what not, and in my missment of you I decididated to seek u out by means of your works. So, HERE I AM!!!!! and quite the hello to u too capitan-and that was no typo,add might I.
 
DreamWriter17 replied...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 4:25 pm :
Yes, our conversations have been quite lacking in depth and existence, haven't they?  And I am honored that you chose this work to restart our online conversements.
 
iankizer replied...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 6:48 pm :
Crucified, I love that word. This poem is incredible though. I just read four of your poems, but this is one is definitely the best, it makes me feel like i'm seeing emotion in some abstract form of brain paintings.
 
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