Susie

October 9, 2011
By Sarah0227 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
Sarah0227 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
If your slate is clean then you can throw stones if your slate is not then leave her alone!
-Jesus Christ Superstar-


Susie was a timid girl who had no friends,






















and lived in an Orphanage with only a bear as her friend.
For years she wished this bear could talk,






















oh, all the things she would do if they walked in the park.
On the night of her 10th Birthday her wish came true,

















he could walk he could talk like me and you.
They played all day they talked all night they talked all night,

















now nothing can give Susie any fright.
The other children were dazzled by this bear’s abilities,


















and took the bear from her within her sleep.
They played with him all day and all night long,




















now Susie’s friend was really gone.
Oh poor Susie loved him so,



























so because she cared she let him go
She died of loneliness because no one cared,




















and nobody missed her not even the bear.


The author's comments:
This was inspired by Tim Burton and Al Gory. This is based on a real expirence i have had with a ex-friend. I hope people can relate,understand, and enjoy this poem.

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on Oct. 26 2011 at 8:14 pm
Sarah0227 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your slate is clean then you can throw stones if your slate is not then leave her alone!
-Jesus Christ Superstar-

ignore the stupid spacing the spacing was perfect on the word but idk wat happened. :(




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