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Slice after slice.
The blood keeps coming.
Tears are running down her face.
She can’t take it anymore.
She lifts the blade to her thumping vain.
Then she remembers.
She remembers the people who used to care about her.
She remembers the people who used to talk to her.
She remembers the good times.
She remembers that special one.
He’s the one who caused her this pain.
He’s the one who dumped her like trash.
She keeps thinking this.
Then she realizes.
It’s really her fault.
Her fault because, she’s the one who fell for him.
She’s the one who asked him out and he said yes.
The thoughts keep flooding into her mind.
She presses the blade into her vain.
Slice after slice.
The blood keeps coming.
Tears are running down her face.
She can’t take it anymore.
She won’t take it anymore.
It’s over.





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PixielovesLittleRed said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 3:40 pm
this is absoloutly AMAZING!!! i wish i could write like this! one minor spelling mistake but it still has the same effect on the reader. off to read more by this amazingly talented author!  :)
 
LouiseFallsEasy replied...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 3:44 pm
Chur bo (:
You are the only who has actually pointed that out. Well, others probably have, but they didn't write a response (:
 
Mikeyairplane said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 11:23 pm
Woah! Very Visual and a nice piece. I like it (:
 
Louise D. replied...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 11:52 pm
Thank you Mikey (:
 
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