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In a parallel universe
Black would be white
Wrong would be right
Up would be down
Square would be round

In a parallel universe
Yes would be no
Stop would be go
More would be less
Worst would be best

In a parallel universe
Hot would be cold
Dirt would be gold
Short would be tall
Big would be small

In a parallel universe
You would be mine
and I would be yours





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Ethereal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 24, 2011 at 5:34 am
I like it- it's simple and sweet.
 
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 4:10 pm
Wow. This. was. amazing! I love how you were able to make this all rhyme! The only critique I have for you is to expand on the last stanza please! As a reader, I feel like it ended too early and I noticed the two lines missing in the last stanza. Other than that, nice work! (by the way, the cheesiness worked here)
 
Naomi518 replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 10:16 pm
haha thanks! I wrote this a few months ago at like 2 AM and never bothered editing it. Thanks for the advice! :)
 
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