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I am from forts with my brother
And playing on trampolines.
I am from life as we know it,
And life as we don’t.

I am from late night dreams
And terrible nightmares.
I am from beasts and I am from
Angels.

I am from life,
And I am from death.
I am from strength
But I’m also from weakness.

I am from working together
And splitting apart.
I am from eating and laughing,
Yet tears make their way through.

I am from freedom
I am from Me.



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Angel_Writer said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:11 pm

I like it. I like the feeling I get from reading it, I feel strength. Wisdom. I feel that it has a lot of truth to it. Good job. :)

Would you read one of mine please?

 
Sassychix234 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:13 pm
Thank you so much! And sure, I'll read one of your pieces. 
 
EndlesslyDetectingMyOddities said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:06 pm
I like this poem, it's nice. (told you)
 
Sassychix234 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:06 pm
Smooth. Really truly smooth. 
 
HateKnuckle said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:01 pm
I like the idea but u should make it more personal. It sounds too generic. Other than that good job.
 
Sassychix234 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:02 pm
Personal? How?
 
DependentMissIndependent said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:51 pm
I reallly like how you said something but then wrote something else. And this sounds so much like me!! :)
 
ChaoticBliss said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:36 pm

I like it! I like how you included antithesis, aka "I am from life as we know it, and life as we don't."

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

I think you did a good job!

 
Sassychix234 replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:39 pm
Thank you so much! This was a spur of the moment kind of piece but I showed it to my English teacher and he told me it was really good so I posted it. 
 
PrincessBubblegum said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:29 pm

I dig it. I like the part where strength and weakness contradict eachother. This was well done.

 

 
sunshine7223 replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:37 pm
I like this piece. I think you did a great job comparing the enjoyable activities/concepts to the not so enjoyable activities/concepts. (: Good job!
 
Sassychix234 replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:40 pm
Thank you! It means alot to have baias opions on my piece!
 
BryttonPollock said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 2:53 pm
beautiful. :)
 
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