First

August 12, 2011
By J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger


My first memory has faded away with times help.
The joy I felt evaporates into times air.
I'm here, I'm there...
I felt the happiness, I felt the sorrow.
The memory burns in with the fire.
The picture perfect setting crumbles and melts away with the flame.
The first memory has scarred into me.
Who am I?
Who am I suppose to be with this empty memory?


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J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:45 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

Okay I will check it out :)

on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:32 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

i'd like you to check my stuff out but its definatly up to you

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:29 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

Thank you. Thanks for commenting if there is a piece of your work you would like me to comment or rate let me know. 

on Nov. 1 2011 at 4:25 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

this is really good

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:30 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
19 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

Thanks, I actually wrote this piece for school but it deffently came from the heart.

Number7713 said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 10:39 am
Number7713, La Mesa, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Learn to say no. Because when the Devil shows up with a trunk full of promises, it's harder than you think to walk away." -I don't know...
or
"Think outside of your situation." -Hodgy Beats

Wow, this is really good. At first I thought it was okay, but as I kept re-reading it and really put some thought into it, I noticed that this was actually really deep. Good job. :)


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