Into the Ocean

July 29, 2011
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Whoosh It goes
Like my heart when I see his eyes
Like an asteroid falling through the sky

Smash It goes
Like a spoon against glass
Like the quiet after she passed

Crash It goes
Like a jump in my soul
Like diving into Alice's hole

Quiet as death
Beautiful as her heart
How I miss her
How I wish I could depart
Ever so deep
Into the ocean...

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PrincessBubblegum said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:15 pm

Again, I agree with IamtheshyStargirl. This was gorgeous, and the imagery was so vivid.


IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Gorgeously bittersweet and young feeling. 
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