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I’ll grab your hand and you’ll grab mine
And we’ll dance together by the shoreline.

We’ll dance together listening to the sweet music tone
Of the man’s saxophone.

The man was standing by the shoreline
Where I grabbed your hand and you grabbed mine.



I’ll sway with you, your feet will a line with mine
And we’ll know that our moment is greater than just fine.

You’ll pull me closer
Making my heart beat louder.

My heart beated louder in our moment that was greater than fine
Where I swayed with you, your feet alined with mine.



I’ll let my feet glide to a stop when you will come to a complete hault
And then we’ll listen as your voice will say, “It’s your fault.”

“It’s your fault for making me feel as light as a feather,
Just knowing that we’re together.”

I found that it was my fault
Where I glided my feet to a stop when you came to a complete hault.



I’ll let my mouth find yours, standing on that shoreline.
And I’ll know it would mark a spot in my heart, where I grabbed your hand and you grabbed mine

We’ll kiss each other listening to the sweet music tone
Of the man’s saxophone.

The man was standing by the shoreline
Where I found your heart and you found mine.




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Rita V. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 8:24 am:
You have an amazing ability to make the reader feel as though it"s them . Absolutely Beautiful! You have a gift girl. Keep writing more for everyone to enjoy. Proud grandma R.
 
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jacob savage said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
i really like this its amazing jewels
 
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Joceluna said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:40 am:
WOW!! i wanna cry it is so beautiful :) you are so amazing an excellent writer
 
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Danika said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 6:58 pm:
The chosen words are so vibrant, it makes me happy & cry inside at the same time. I am proud of you J. and very proud that your my daughter. Please continue to express yourself..... Heart D.
 
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