Not Mine

July 10, 2011
By jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.


Scared
To fall
Lose my heart
Lose it all
Scared
To get to close
To get hurt again
Another pain dose
Scared
That its all lust
Heart pounding
About to bust
Scared
Because you act so kind
I don't want to lose you
Even though your not mine.

The author's comments:
This piece is about a teen who is afraid to fall in love.

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on Jul. 18 2011 at 12:00 am
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.

yeah i know, but being patient is hard.... lol.

on Jul. 17 2011 at 5:40 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
36 articles 17 photos 391 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

Yeah, that happens. :| Just be as patient as you can (I'm SUPER impatient) and pass the time by writing more stuff to bombard the editors with. :D

on Jul. 17 2011 at 4:53 pm
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.

ur welcome. :) im tryin to submit some new work but its taking forever

on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:21 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
36 articles 17 photos 391 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

Aw, thank you. ^-^

on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:19 pm
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.

thanks. im glad  like it. ive read a poem of urs. its as great. and ur pictures are amazing!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:27 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
36 articles 17 photos 391 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

This is good. You conveyed emotion well, and the sparse words evoke a sense of isolation. Great job! :)


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