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Touching you only with my eyes
The way you smile is killer nice
You can see how pretty she is
Her name is all you even hiss
You can see her no matter what
But you can see me only fat





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KittyKat1419 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2015 at 7:14 pm
This is an, good poem but could use some work and maybe make it longer
 
CaptainFabulous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 6:21 am
There is defininetly a lot of powerful meaning behind this. I love it :D
 
Regs_the_Shorty said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 10:31 am
I like how it was short but you got your point across
 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 10:19 am
Should even be ever?---okay this poem was short but breathtakingly powerful. i was amzed by how much meaning you put into the short lines! Great!
 
Emily.L said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:00 pm
I think we can all agree with Shayna. I can see how hurtful that could be to somebody just in those lines.
 
DaylightDarkness said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 7:16 pm
I agree with Shayna, the intensity for the length of this poem is incredible.
 
Shayna121 said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 4:00 pm
Wow...really intense for a brief poem...good job!
 
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