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My Bonnie's Heart

June 24, 2011
By Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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And she stood there alone, palms sweaty
Eyes clenched, wishing everything would be alright.
Storm rolling in, she did not cower
With head held high, she stood.
No fear but all might.

Her determined chin, her sturdy stance
One would not think she was suffering.
A pain more unbearable than the twisting of a leg
The breaking of her poor, wee heart.

For one as young, who hasn't seen the world, she feels the weight of it upon her chest
As she looks down at the face of her lover, she says, ''Y'er in a better place now. Take rest.''

© Felicia F, Marlow, OK

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Princess2011 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 11:00 am
Princess2011 BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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 dont worry.. your reply is very much visible now..:) ....and youre worth all the credit.... even i have a poem up.. its awaiting an approval frm the concerned authorities.. do check it out.... wont say its good.. rather it may be clumsy.. but...nevertheless.. there is no hiding frm you.. and i must mention this.. youre as good as human being as a writer..:)
Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 7:22 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
16 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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Dang, don't know why my reply to you, Princess2011 isn't showing :/

Thank you so much for your comment, means alot ( :

You give me too much credit than I'm worth, thank you :')

Every write should have their own Princess2011 :D

Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 7:20 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
16 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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OMG!

Deeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D

Thank you :')

And yes, you were missed :'(

DeeCaf said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 7:05 am
DeeCaf, No Way, Other
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That's the thing about cake, it demands to be eaten.

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That's beautiful, S! And I missed you so freaking much :(
Princess2011 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 12:25 am
Princess2011 BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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this is......it reflects your thoughts at that moment.. one can actually comprehend how ..u know..sad u might have been while writing this one.. and thats how a writer should be.. ..its like i could empathise while reading every word...:) very very good..:)
Blackmirror SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 9:13 am
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." -Aristotle
"Every man dies. Not every man really lives." -William Wallace
"Sanity is madness put to good use." -George Santayana

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thanks for looking at 'em :)

and i can sorta see that you were in that kinda mood when you wrote this poem. i tend to be too when i write poems...

Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:20 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
16 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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I'm actually just checking me mail at the moment :P

I'll be sure to check them out ( :

And thank you ^^ .

I was in a 'hurt' mood writing it soo.. Yeah P:

 

Blackmirror SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:24 pm
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." -Aristotle
"Every man dies. Not every man really lives." -William Wallace
"Sanity is madness put to good use." -George Santayana

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((tried to edit last post, but it wouldn't. my poems are online, would you read them please? :) ))

also, just thought to tell you again that i liked that. :) i liked the way you wrote everything, never really clearly stating everything....i like that :)

Blackmirror SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:18 pm
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." -Aristotle
"Every man dies. Not every man really lives." -William Wallace
"Sanity is madness put to good use." -George Santayana

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i loved it. :) good job :)

((i'm waiting for my poems to be approved...would you read them when they are?))