A Woodland Path

June 20, 2011
By AddieLynnLynn SILVER, Dallas, Georgia
AddieLynnLynn SILVER, Dallas, Georgia
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A woodland path in the dappled sun,
hushed and quiet.
Only the subtle crunch of the leaves under my feet,
almost perfectly silent.

There is an eerie feeling lurking in the trees,
the atmosphere, and air.
Bark on the sturdiest trees are tough and strong,
unlike me- I'm scared.

I'm lost in the depths
of mixtures of green.
My vision is going vertigo,
possibly light headed it seems.

A rush of panic
starts in through my heart.
Twisting my insides,
ripping me apart.

A woodland path in the dappled sun,
hushed and quiet.
Only the subtle wisp of my breath,
and this obscure, vast environment.



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on Jul. 6 2011 at 9:37 pm
AddieLynnLynn SILVER, Dallas, Georgia
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Thankyou!! You are so AMAZING for saying that. You are like the only person who has commented on any of my posts, so I appretiate it. And by the way, I just recently joined, too- so welcome!:)

on Jul. 6 2011 at 2:40 pm
stolensecrets BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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"There doesnt have to be a reason for everything; stop explaining and start living." Learn it and live it---its my motto. :)

Im sad that no one has commented on this yet! Very pure emotion, it really is good. Wow, your a great writer too. Keep posting Im sure youll get more recognition as well as get better. Good luck. :)


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