Trapped

June 19, 2011
By -MiMi- BRONZE, Borger, Texas
-MiMi- BRONZE, Borger, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When the world says give up, hope say try again,


Trapped inside these four walls my thoughts come to life,
the music flows like wins in the night.
The tears I have held inside will falls,
while I alone in these four walls.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem during a time in my life that I was terribly stressed and felt trapped. (hence the name) please don't disrespect me or the poem.

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on Jul. 7 2011 at 7:08 pm
AnonymousJennie...., N, California
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Favorite Quote:
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Wow I really like this poem, it says so much with just a few words =)

on Jul. 6 2011 at 1:38 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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No need to apologise! One of the things I really like about poetry is that grammar does not really matter.

-MiMi- BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 12:51 am
-MiMi- BRONZE, Borger, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When the world says give up, hope say try again,

Actually I did make a few errors unintentionally. I typed it on my ipod so it decided to be complicated and change my words. I apologise for any spelling errors.

on Jul. 6 2011 at 12:31 am
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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I really hope you don't think I'm disrespecting you if I ask this: are the gramatical errors intentional? Honestly I don't care one way or the other, I'm just curious. I really like this poem.


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