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Trapped inside these four walls my thoughts come to life,
the music flows like wins in the night.
The tears I have held inside will falls,
while I alone in these four walls.




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LetsPretend said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 7:08 pm:
Wow I really like this poem, it says so much with just a few words =)
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 12:31 am:
I really hope you don't think I'm disrespecting you if I ask this: are the gramatical errors intentional? Honestly I don't care one way or the other, I'm just curious. I really like this poem.
 
-MiMi- replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 12:51 am :
Actually I did make a few errors unintentionally. I typed it on my ipod so it decided to be complicated and change my words. I apologise for any spelling errors.
 
BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 1:38 pm :
No need to apologise! One of the things I really like about poetry is that grammar does not really matter.
 
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