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Darling I'm Fine, and You?

I have fears
I shed tears
we make a great pair
and pain I can bear
but the truth you seek
is making you weak
with a small speaking session
you send out a question
my heart is breaking
and my soul you are taking
as you shout hey
sweetie are you ok
I walk away
and say what you think is true
darling I'm fine. and you?



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open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 2:35 pm
This is really good.  I love the point of view from which it is spoken.  Keep writting :)
 
Starrrh replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 9:50 am

Thank you. I actually did stop with poems. Im currently writing lyrics

 

 
open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:05 pm
That's cool. Do u write music, and if so for what instument?
 
Starrrh replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 10:06 am
no i just write lyrics. I would give them to family of friends that play.
 
Starrrh replied...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 10:06 am

no i just write lyrics. my friends play but i dont

 

 
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