Heaven Help Us

June 20, 2011
By AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson


Moonlight swims across the blue sea, trees wave to one another in the green forest, and now darkness swallows the world. That once blue sea is now black. Green forests turn brown. The once colorful world is now dead.

Hearts are spread along the sidewalk, heads are dangling from the street posts-where lamps should be-, screams of lost victims creep into your mind, arms and legs-that still move-drag themselves along the pavement, and half the world has vanished. Half the world has gone completely missing, disappeared. The worst part? They left without a trace.


The author's comments:
Random thing I came up with. I could just see the whole thing in my mind and the minute it appeared, I had to write it down.

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AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2014 at 9:33 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

"Laugh My F****** Head Off." XD

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:29 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

Wow, I have never heard of lmfao... What's it mean???

AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:37 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

Hehe. Sweetheart, have you not noticed I'm a little freaky?? Lmfao! :D

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:13 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

That's freaky... You gave me goosebumbs! I love it!... But it's freaky :)

AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2011 at 1:28 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

Thanks, Archie! Love you!

Archgan said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:27 pm
This is really good, Ashli!

jw'smom said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 7:58 am
So proud of you...

AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 8:27 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

Thanks, Jada! I love you too!

on Jun. 30 2011 at 8:25 pm
i should be first goofball lol jk luv u jadaaaa ps first is the worst and second is the best:D

on Jun. 30 2011 at 8:23 pm
so amazing ashli, ur such a great poet and im so proud of u, good luck ps that was DEEP!!! :P <3

Jadaaa!! said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 8:21 pm
Ashlii!!! amazingg!!! HAHAHA LOVEEE YOUUU <3


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