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Your Faded Smell

May 23, 2011
By oddshadow BRONZE, Saint Paul, Minnesota
oddshadow BRONZE, Saint Paul, Minnesota
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We began with an ending

There isn’t other way around

I knew it was coming

So did you

Didn’t you feel it, inside you?

I did.

Something like gut feeling

I wanted to keep it simple

So did you

Using abstract terms, simple words

More like a simple good bye

No eye contact, No expression

Lips sharing a simple, dry kiss

Yea, it was a simple good bye

Don’t get me wrong

I had words to share

Thoughts to express

But, I got lost

In the Blur

Blur of unspoken words

Blur of confusion

Blur of guilt.

Don’t worry though

I wasn’t blank or numb

I felt it all

After all, it was a split second

Again don’t worry

In the end, this is just a good bye

Like we were meant to be

The author's comments:
An emotional rollercoaster, I went through when I had to say good bye to "lover" who was never mine.

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