Brother vs. Sister

May 22, 2011
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I’m hunting my sister,
Here’s a description of her,
she has fangs and claws,
and scales all over,
I only have a slingshot to defend myself.
I’m hunting my brother,
here’s a description of him:
he has 5 ft long fangs,
1 ft long claws,
2 ox horns at the side of his head,
with scales all over…
there he is!
Max wins!

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LoudDreamer said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 1:50 pm
This is a good one. It reminds me of Silverstien.
JoPepper replied...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 9:59 pm
Thank you I wrote this in like 6th grade! :)
LoudDreamer replied...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 11:01 am
Oh, really? It's good! What grade are you in now? Do you have work more recent?
YAYwriting said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 11:53 am
I really like this! it's interesting and I can just imagine the two little kids sneaking around, imagining their siblings as something they want to attack. I do suggest making more variety in the descriptions of the siblings, but that's it. Good job! :)
JoPepper replied...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 3:50 pm
Thank you !!!!!! :D
YAYwriting replied...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 3:58 pm
You're welcome :)
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