one day will end

May 2, 2011
By spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"


AS I'M HERE LONELY
THINKING ABOUT ALL MY REGRETS
MAKE ME WONDER WHY DO I HAVE A BAD SIDE OF MY PART?
GOOD GIRL GONE BAD IS DEFINETLY NOT MY TYPE BUT I'M FEELING IT IN MY BLOOD SOMEHOW
MY MIND HAS FREEZE UP FROM MY PAST
IT'S NOT HOW I WANNA BE
IT'S NOT HOW I WANT TO BE
I WANT TO BE THE GIRL THAT HAVE PURSUE ALL OF HER DREAMS
THAT HAVE DONE THE RIGHTEOUS THINGS
I WANNA LET GO SO I COULD REACH
CARYING ALL THESE DISAPOINTMENTS BEHIND MY BACK MAKE ME FEEL WEAK
WEAK ENOUGH TO GIVE UP
THE WEAKNESS OF MY PART IS FALLING EVERYTHING APART
WILL I RISE STRONGLY?
WILL I CONTINUE WITH MY GOALS?
THATS FOR SURE
THERE AINT NO BODY THAT WILL STEP ON MY WAY TO DESTROY MY SENSES
I WILL STAND UP BEFORE THEM,SO I COULD RISE STRONG ENOUGH
I WILL SING OUT FREE
I WILL
I WIL
YES, I WILL MOVE ON
I WILL LET GO TO START A NEW ME.


The author's comments:
DONT LET YOUR PAST HOLD YOU FROM PURSUING YOU DREAMS.PEOPLE MAKE MISTAKES ALL THE TIME,AND IT'S TIME TO MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE.

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spency SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:06 pm
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

txx,and ill work on it

spency SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:05 pm
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

tx,ok ill work on it

on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:41 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

It's great. Your grammar needs a little work in my opinion, but you've got some really great poems. Keep writing! :)

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 11:43 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

let me know guyz wat u think abt it...thank u




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